The Use of Force 4

There are sections in this work which do not move the plot forward. In these sections, William Carlos Williams instead decides to further create an image in our heads. He takes the time to paint the picture more vividly in our minds. "When I arrived I was met by the mother, a big startled looking woman, very clean and apologetic who merely said, Is this the doctor? and let me in. In the back, she added. You must excuse us, doctor, we have her in the kitchen where it is warm. It is very damp here sometimes." In this section, the plot does not go anywhere. William Carlos Williams decides to set up a character so that the reader can better understand and relate. Note the "big startled looking woman, very clean and apologetic." Williams could have simply just have said, "The mom came into the doctor's office" and the plot would still have been the exact same. Williams, however, set her up so that we can get a feel for who she is. The ending to this short story was both predictable and surprising. "She had been hiding that sore throat for three days at least ... Tried to get off her father's lap and fly at me while tears of defeat blinded her eyes." If you read the first paragraph and skipped to the ending you would be utterly surprised. Why was the doctor treating this whole thing as a competition. However, as you dig deeper into the doctor's violent behavior, this is clearly the perfect ending. There was no way the doctor would lose this fight. "Others must be protected against her. It is a social necessity. ... One goes on to the end." His mindset is clear. He is determined to go through with this, regardless of the costs, until he succeeds.

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Since this short story is set in a time where anesthesia and laughing gas are foreign concepts, I do not necessarily identify with the purpose or values expressed in this work. Personally, I believe that the doctor is an insane man that needs to use excessive force to get what he wants. If using excessive force to accomplish a goal is a value expressed in this story, I clearly don't identify with the story in that aspect. However, in a way, we can identify with the experience of the sick, little girl. I'll make this clear right away: I have never had a doctor forcefully stick a spoon down my throat until I started to bleed. Still, as little kids, most of us have been extremely fearful with going to the doctor's office. Let's be honest, it's a very frightening experience. You initially don't know this strange man with these weird tools. Apparently he is trying to help us, but the only reassurance we can get from our mom and dad is, "He won't hurt you." Just hearing the word "hurt" makes us cringe and, ironically, we are now more fearful than ever. So in this way, I understand why the little girl was so reluctant. She does not know this man nor trust this man... and why should she? The blame should ultimately be placed on the mom and dad. Their job was to calm the little and push her to trust the complete stranger. However, they completely fail and end making her more anxious. They were complete pushovers with no control over their little girl. "The father tried his best, and he was a big man but the fact that she was his daughter, his shame at her behavior and his dread of hurting her made him release her just at the critical times when I had almost achieved success..." Bad parenting at it's finest.

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William Carlos Williams is known for his imagery, so unsurprisingly “The Use of Force” is a very vivid and, sometimes, graphic short story. “The child was fairly eating me up with her cold, steady eyes, and no expression to her face whatever … She had magnificent blonde hair, in profusion. One of those picture children often reproduced in advertising leaflets and the photogravure sections of the Sunday papers.” Williams uses detail and familiar concepts (advertising leaflets and the Sunday papers) to better create an image in the reader’s head. He also employs his vivid imagery when he touches on the doctor’s violence: “Then she shrieked terrifyingly, hysterically. Stop it! Stop it! You’re killing me! … but before I could see anything she came down again and gripping the wooden blade between her molars she reduced it to splinters … In a final unreasoning assault I overpowered the child’s neck and jaws. I forced the heavy silver spoon back of her teeth and down her throat till she gagged.” These disturbing scenes are recreated clearly in our heads. I believe Williams does this to clearly show us the madness and the absurdity of the doctor’s behavior. William Carlos Williams also uses an unusual approach in his writing. He flows from the doctor’s narration to dialogue without warning. Even more confusing, he does not even use quotation marks during the dialogue. This makes the text feel a little scattered and unorganized which may serve the purpose of showing us that they doctor might be a little out of it. His mind might be a little scattered and unorganized. He might be going a little crazy. This could explain his erratic and over the top behavior.

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In William Carlos Williams' short story, "The Use of Force", everything starts off relatively calm. The doctor initially appears to be a normal doctor dealing with a usual case. There is a sick young girl with a high fever who needs her throat to be checked for diphtheria. This is a serious concern as there have been recent cases of diphtheria related deaths. He smiles and asks nicely for the girl to open her mouth. The girl, however, is reluctant and the idiotic parents refuse to step in and take control of their child. For the two aforementioned reasons, the doctor is visibly getting upset and annoyed. “At that I ground my teeth in disgust,” the doctor says. And in an instance the story takes a whole new turn. “Then the battle began. I had to do it.” He was determined to check the girl’s throat. Although I could sympathize with the doctor for having to deal with such difficult people, I was certainly not expecting the doctor’s change of character. He goes from your average, smiling doctor to an angry, violent, almost psychopathic man who claimed, “I could have torn the child apart in my own fury and enjoyed it. It was a pleasure to attack her.” This change in behavior was still shocking although it was foreshadowed through the doctor’s visible annoyance and disgust with the family. I was surprised with the doctor’s excessive use of force. In this current day and age, a doctor would simply use methods such as using laughing gas and anesthesia to deal with a problem such as this. In my opinion, since force is used over medication, the short story must be set in a time where anesthesia or laughing gas was not available to the general public. Either that or the doctor is just a psychopathic who needs a few more sessions with his therapist.